Pag nasamood ako, yan nakakapagsulat ako ng mga ganyang bagay.. some of it might be gramatically wrong, but i wrote it with all my heart.. (corny, hekhekhek)
Circumstances are really not on your side
And it makes you feeble..
It is as if you’re in a brink and you’re about to fall
No one was there to rescue you
Your body is falling
And you can do nothing about it
As u fall on the precipice
Wounds, cuts, lesion and bruises are getting in to your body
When you reached the bottom
You were paralyzed, can’t budge your body
Even your soul was dented
The throe was so intense that you can’t bear it
Suddenly your place was so murky
You see a soul but you’re not able to distinguish
And you lose consciousness
That single soul was so anxious and vexed
Because she was sentient of the incident
When you’re about to fall
She came running to the point of losing her breath
Unfortunately, she was not able to catch you
She cried a river, and she blames herself
For not being there when you fall
But then she realized that there’s no room for it
She has to be brawny and strong
For the soul that fall from a brink
She lifts the body and put it in her lap
Trying to alleviate the twinge in your soul
She furnish the strength that she all have
To regain your strength
She was weeping, and praying
Asking for Him to give back your existence
Because she knows that she can never live a life
Without your existence
And that single soul is
Your very BEST FRIEND….
It is as if you’re in a brink and you’re about to fall
No one was there to rescue you
Your body is falling
And you can do nothing about it
As u fall on the precipice
Wounds, cuts, lesion and bruises are getting in to your body
When you reached the bottom
You were paralyzed, can’t budge your body
Even your soul was dented
The throe was so intense that you can’t bear it
Suddenly your place was so murky
You see a soul but you’re not able to distinguish
And you lose consciousness
That single soul was so anxious and vexed
Because she was sentient of the incident
When you’re about to fall
She came running to the point of losing her breath
Unfortunately, she was not able to catch you
She cried a river, and she blames herself
For not being there when you fall
But then she realized that there’s no room for it
She has to be brawny and strong
For the soul that fall from a brink
She lifts the body and put it in her lap
Trying to alleviate the twinge in your soul
She furnish the strength that she all have
To regain your strength
She was weeping, and praying
Asking for Him to give back your existence
Because she knows that she can never live a life
Without your existence
And that single soul is
Your very BEST FRIEND….
haggang gitna lang ako... nagdudugo na tenga ko kasi english eh pero alam ko na maganda ang poem mo na ito pero poem ka ba? parang kwento eh.
ReplyDeletebuti kapa pag sinisipag nakakagawa ka ng ganyan. ako kapag sinisipag, napapagod. hehe.
Ang galing nman! nung nasa skul pa ako masipag akong gumawa ng tula. mga notebooks ko puno ng mga tula tula... hehe! ngayon tamad nako...
ReplyDeleteMerong tula para sa teacher kong bading, sa super Miss tapia na guro at kung ano ano pa! hehe! mahanap nga ang mga notebook kung yon... baka mahagilap ko!!
gifted child ka rin pala... sana lagi kang nasa mood para maraming tula...
ReplyDeletesya ba yung kinukwento mong kakambal mo? kakambal sa kakulitan? :)
i like it!you have magnified the feeling...keep it up! thnx for dropping at my site.
ReplyDelete@phoebe
ReplyDeletehindi ko rin alam kung wento ito o tula.. ahehehehe..
minsan lang gumana ang utak ko..
@TK
salamat sa compliment TK.. nun high school ako, napipilitan akong magsulat ng tula kase, member ako sa school paper namin..
@Misty
Hindi sya yun kambal ko.. yan yung bestfriend ko..
@Ev
Hi ev, sana lagi ka dito...